[BBS]

[fierybluebird]

The feeling of flying, would that I could describe it to you.
The rush of air,
The wind flowing through hair,
Truly nothing else can ever compare
And I would give it away for you.

The ocean waves breaking their tide endless time and time again
The roaring crash
The feel of a briny splash
The salty depths that eternally clash
For you, you only need ask, and I'll forget all about the ocean

For every beautiful flower that ever would or could be
Painted red or blue
A different flower for every hue
But I'm sure by now, you know what I'd do
I'd grow you a garden and burn it all down, if ever you asked of me


-- From Marco
And that is how you do ABBBA format. Am I the only one to prefer it to ABBA? Maybe it's because it's closer to a limerick with five lines.


[ooc: yeah this is just posted the BBS. Feel free to point and mock or gush or EPIC FACEPALM as you see fit. EVERYONE can read it though. Everyone.]

Comments

[turnip-rage.livejournal.com]

Marco? Shut up.

[redcinemareel]

Don't tell him to shut up! Besides, he isn't talking. Idiot.

[turnip-rage.livejournal.com]

Text or speech, it's still babble.

[redcinemareel]

Not such a surprising retort.

[fierybluebird]

No.

[turnip-rage.livejournal.com]

Well, I tried.

[fierybluebird]

It was a valiant attempt.

[gyrocopter.livejournal.com]

I dunno, I kinda like that first paragraph... thing.

Not that I know what the hell to do with poems.

[BIAS BIAS BIAS]

[fierybluebird]

Thanks mate.

Girlfriend felt we needed to write more to each other.

[gyrocopter.livejournal.com]

Really now? Had no idea you even had a gal.

Who's the lucky chick?

[fierybluebird]

Cute violent redhead with a chainsaw. Maybe you've seen her around?

[moogle-ribbon.livejournal.com]

its no good at ALL! Really cheesy

Ill lend yuo avon's plays so next time you can do bettter

[fierybluebird]

Avon?

[moogle-ribbon.livejournal.com]

lord avon wroet really famous plays. Ive got some copies in my room.

[fierybluebird]

Yeah?

It was really that bad?

[redcinemareel]

Darling, don't listen to what anyone else says!

I loved it. Thank you!

I'll hold you to burning down gardens of flowers for me, just so you know.

-♥

[fierybluebird]

Anytime you want babe.

[redcinemareel]

I need to work on mine. Imagine me with a loss for words. There are rare occasions that would happen.

You'd know, right?

[fierybluebird]

Usually if I'm keeping your mouth busy, eh.

[potionemperor.livejournal.com]

An interesting piece of poetry.|

[fierybluebird]

Thanks.

[potionemperor.livejournal.com]

it was in your own hand?|

[fierybluebird]

Yes.

Sorry it's not that good, eh.

[bunnypassingby]

How romantic!

- Mikuru

[fierybluebird]

Eh, thank you very much. I tried my best.